Thread:Vividclyde/@comment-15489637-20140222034924/@comment-67.235.162.101-20140228195354

What the hell? Anyway, let me try this again.

''Sugar awakens, locked inside of a bedroom. She looks at a digital clock, and realizes that it is five days later. ''

  

Jake ': Hi Sugar. I want to play a game. '

'Sugar screams and tried to go far Jake but He caught her and covered her face with cloth that causes her to fall in a sleep.  '

Sugar ': Heee..... '

  

''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">She gets off of the bed and tries to leave the room. She can’t. She sees a plate of food on a side table. She feels the plate, and notices that it is still hot. Her stomach rumbles, and she decides to eat the food. Afterwards, she starts pacing the room and tries to think of a game plan. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%"><span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">An hour later, the room is in disarray. The smile on Sugar’s face made the disaster worth it- she found her cell phone. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%"><span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">She tries to call her friends, but gets no response. She then calls the police. They send Officer Lynn out to the house. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%"><span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Hello? Is anyone in here?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  I’m in the bedroom!

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder tries to open the door, but he can’t. He ends up kicking the door down. ''

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Are you okay?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">I’m fine, but have you found my friends?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What do you mean?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  They all went missing! We were in the forest, and everyone just started to disappear! I haven’t seen anyone in days!

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  How long have you been locked in here?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Five days. I’ve been locked in this room for five days. The doctor locked me in here.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What doctor?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Jake? He lives in the mansion out in the woods.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Are you sure it was him who did this to you?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Yes! He covered my face with a cloth… It must have had something on it that caused me to pass out. He must have locked me in here afterwards. He must not have found my phone, because it was stuck in the bed frame.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Okay. I’m going to call more officers over so we can go look for your friends in the woods. Can you describe to me where this mansion is?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar gives him the best directions she can think of. Ryder calls in for backup. They go into the forest, but Sugar stays behind. A few hours later, Arvin shows up at the house with some of his friends. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="text-align:center; line-height:150%"><span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Arvin:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar! When did you get back?

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Back? I’ve been here for days!

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar glances at one of Arvin’s friends, Grant, before blushing and looking back at Arvin. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What are you guys doing here?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Kyler: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  We are getting ready for a band rehearsal.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Arvin: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  You didn’t hear? The three of have a band together!

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Really? What is the name of the band?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Grant: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  AHS. Stands for American Horse Stable.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Why would you name your band American Horse Stable?

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">They continue talking through the night, and Sugar catches them up to speed on everything that has been going on. Sugar begins to worry when the police haven’t come back. She decides to sleep at Arvin’s house. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">The next morning, Sugar awakens to a message on her cell phone. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">You are not safe with me. '''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">-A '''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Arvin! Arvin! I just got a message on my phone from A!

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Grant, Kyler, and Arvin rush in. Grant pulls her into a quick hug. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">They hear a knock on the door. Kyler gets up to check who it is. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Hello. Is Sugar here?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  I’m here! Did you find anything officer?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  We managed to find your friends at the mansion. We had to take them to the hospital though. Some of them experienced gunshot wounds. The doctor managed to escape the house though before we were able to get him.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Arvin: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Thank you officer. Do you think we can go see them?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  I’m sure you could. Just… please stay together. We are continuing to look for Jake.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Kyler:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Is there anything that we could do to help?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Like I said, just stay together. There is a smaller chance of something happening if you all are in groups. We will have someone watching the house in case he tries to come over here.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Grant: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What should we do if he does come over and get in? Should we just call the police?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Ryder: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Yes. In the meantime, just keep all doors and windows locked. It honestly wouldn’t be smart for anyone to try and break in here right now. I’m sure Jake knows that the house is being watched. I wouldn’t expect anything. However, I would suggest that as soon as the other girls get out of the hospital, for you all to stay together for a few days.

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">They all leave the house. Ryder continues his search for the doctor, while the band members and Sugar go to the hospital. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">A week later, the girls get the all clear to leave the hospital. Arvin suggests that they all stay at his house for the time being. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">On the ride home, Sugar and Grant are talking. A big grin spreads across Sugar’s face, and she gives Grant a hug. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">At Arvin’s house, Sugar and Quinn are talking. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">So, what’s going between you and Grant?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What do you mean? Nothing’s going on.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Be straight with me. I saw how you two were in the van.

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar grins again. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  He asked if I would go out with him once all this is over with!

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  Oh, wow. Congratulations. I’m really happy for you!

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn looks off into the distance before speaking again. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Where did Paul go?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Sugar: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  I’m not really sure. We left him behind when we went to look for you in the forest. I thought he would be here when we got back, but he wasn’t. I haven’t seen him since then, and it has been over a week now.

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Quinn quickly gets up, with tears in her eyes. She briskly leaves the room. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">A few minutes later, Santana, Quinn, Tina, Sugar, and Marley all receive a text message from an unknown number. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">I’m not done with all of you yet. '''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">Let’s play another game. '''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">A murder game. '''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">'''<span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family: "TimesNewRoman","serif"">-A '''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">They all converge in the living room when someone else enters behind them. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Tina:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Madeline…

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Santana: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What are you doing here?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Tina: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">  What in the hell are you doing?

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Madeline has a gun pointed at them. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height: 150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Madeline:  <span style="font-size:12.0pt; line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">Getting this over with, of course.

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">The lights begin to flicker, before completely going out, encompassing the house into total darkness. A shot rings out, followed by a scream and the distinct sound of a body hitting the floor. ''

<p align="center" class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;text-align:center; line-height:150%">''<span style="font-size: 12.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"TimesNewRoman","serif"">The lights come back on. There is a body on the ground, with a pool of blood encircling it, with a single gunshot wound to the head. ''